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An Audit of My Blog

I have written 9 posts since March. All of my posts were set by my teacher and moderator from a student blogging challenge website. I didn’t write any that were school based or on my own interests. I have had one oversea students/visitors that have gone on my blog. I received 6 comments from classmates and from the moderator (Miss W). The post called “Week 9: Doing My Best”, received the most comments (2) because I was being truthful and writing from my heart. I had the most fun making the post, “Week 8: Cyber Safety”, because I made a video on keeping kids safe on the internet. I didn’t change my blog themes often because I liked how my blog looked and wanted to show a consistent theme. I have 11 widgets, which is about the perfect number of widgets to use because I don’t want my blog to be filled with nonsense widgets that did not add value to my blog.

I had my friend, Gavin, look at my blog. His first impression was that my blog looked like a website for babies. He said that the things that caught his attention were the posts “Week 9: Doing My Best”  and “Week 8: Schooling” because of how I included everything in the survey onto a pie chart. He was distracted from the theme of the blog because of all the bright colors. He suggested that I keep my posts short.

I also asked my dad to look over my blog and see how it was. He said that this blog seemed too elementary. Pictures of the animals on top of the screen captured his attention, but the title of the blog and grammatical errors, distracted him from the blog. His suggestion for my blog is to double check the grammar before posting.

My mom’s comments were on the positive on the pictures. She actually liked the art. It was cute and showed my personality. Although she liked the leadership post, she suggested a brighter and less morbid story for a next story.

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This Blog is Awesome!

There is a competition for the best student blog, and I wasn’t allowed to chose my own.  I was scrolling through a student blog list, and I saw one by a girl named Vivian.  It looks beautiful.  The pink on white looked vibrant for the text, and the white on pink looked pleasant on the background.  I think that this is a good blog because it also has thoughtful posts about her life and things she has interests in.  Help this girl win this contest because I think her blog is worth it.

Here it is : http://viviann735.edublogs.org

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Week 9 : Family Love <3

Write a post on one of the following topics

  • What makes a great family
  • A global issue you would like to help solve
  • My future
  • Visiting overseas

My choices are limited and I don’t want to keep you here all day long, so I am going to do the topic of “What makes a great family.”  I’ll actually do this post through a poem.  Before I show you the poem, I want to first talk about the subject of ‘family’.

Families should be people who are related to each other and love each other no matter what.  Some familes don’t even have to be related to love each other.  I think families are one of the best things in the world because they are the people who motivate you and help you through bad times.

The reason why I chose this subject is because I wanted to talk about something that was important to me.  My famliy is the best in the world and I love them very much.  Now without further a-do, here is the poem.

A Great Family

A family that’s great

has no hate.

A family that’s great

has love everyday.

A family that’s great

doesn’t care about the weight.

A family that’s great

doesn’t have any debate.

A family that’s great

has one amazing trait.

Love is that trait

and it is great.

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Look at these to : http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poems/family/family/

http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/a-family-is-like-a-circle

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Week 8 : Schooling

You might like to run some surveys in your school regarding questions 1,3,4 and 10 above. Collect data and create graphs.

1) What time do you normally get up to go to school? (Top Left)

3) How do you get to school? (Top Right)

4) How long does it take to get to or from school? (Bottom Left)

10) What do you do at break times? Games, activities, etc. (Bottom Right)

 

8 people were asked for this survey.  (Click on the picture to make it bigger.)

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